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Random thoughts, notes and anything else the pressure of algorithms has stopped me from posting elsewhere.

Jay Alto

28 November 2023

Just watched a great video called ‘Paul Klein on How to Succeed as an Artist’. Best part was his 3 key ingredients to having a successful art career: 1. Be distinctive Be yourself. Be honest. Be who you are. What makes you distinctive from everyone else? Focus on it. 2. Get your arse in the game It’s not sufficient to sit in your studio and expect the world to come to you. Creates opportunities where your work gets seen 3. Make great art. Assumed. But interestingly not the most important.

21 November 2023

Just heard about the idea of a ‘Done List’. It’s interesting.

You start the day with an empty list and add anything you get done throughout the day.

It acts as a reminder you could have done nothing, but you didn’t. Might try it.

21 November 2023

Used ChatGPT to pull out the main learnings from this interesting article about revisions and second drafts: The blog post "Revision Round-Up" from Necessary Fiction compiles insights and tips on revision from various authors. Here are the main points: 1. **Resisting False Insights**: Charles Baxter emphasizes avoiding false insights in stories, focusing instead on what's truer and more honest. 2. **Reading Aloud for Revision**: Laura van den Berg mentions reading her work aloud numerous times to fine-tune it. 3. **Hoarding for Revision**: Alissa Nutting describes a hoarder-friendly revision system, collecting everything that could be relevant to her characters and story. 4. **Love for Revision**: Marcy Dermansky talks about her love for revision, seeing it as an integral part of the writing process. 5. **Importance of Sound in Sentences**: Authors emphasize focusing on the sound of sentences, considering how it contributes to the overall effect of the writing. 6. **Integration of Writing and Revision**: Several authors mention that they see writing and revision as one continuous process, revising as they write. 7. **Grateful Dead's Influence on Revision**: Jurgen Fauth draws inspiration from the Grateful Dead, emphasizing the dual tasks of initial drafting and revision. 8. **Linear Progression in Storytelling**: Ryan Call aims for each sentence to naturally lead to the next, ensuring a smooth flow in his stories. 9. **Returning to Basics**: Kirstin Chen talks about going back to basics when struggling with a story, outlining characters’ desires and conflicts. 10. **Leaving Work Alone**: Shya Scanlon suggests leaving finished work alone for a period before revising it, to return with a fresh perspective. 11. **First Drafts and Revision Systems**: Courtney Maum discusses building a revision system into her first drafts to preserve the story's original excitement. 12. **Challenges with Longer Works**: Jennifer Pieroni describes the challenges of revising longer works and how she addresses them with her writing group. 13. **Freeform Revision**: Stefan Milne describes his revision process as freeform, alternating between unconscious and conscious revision phases. 14. **Editorial Perspective on Revision**: Karissa Chen, an editor, talks about the importance of aligning revisions with the author’s intention and the story’s heart. 15. **Removing Unnecessary Elements**: Brian Moll, another editor, emphasizes the importance of removing superfluous elements in writing. 16. **Poetry and Immediate Experience**: Corey Zeller discusses his approach to poetry as an immediate experience, often completed in a single sitting. 17. **Memoir Revision**: Mike Scalise shares his method of using the 'Memento approach' for revising his memoir, keeping key feedback visible at all times. These insights collectively emphasize the importance of honesty and truth in revision, the integration of writing and revising, the significance of sound and flow in sentences, and various personal strategies for revising and refining written work.

21 November 2023

Read an interesting article titled: Lydia Davis: Ten of My Recommendations for Good Writing Habits She has a book. Might order it. Here are my highlights: Take notes regularly. This will sharpen both your powers of observation and your expressive ability. Always work (note, write) from your own interest, never from what you think you should be noting, or writing. Trust your own interest. Let your interest, and particularly what you want to write about, be tested by time, not by other people—either real other people or imagined other people. Be mostly self-taught. There is a great deal to be learned from programs, courses, and teachers. But I suggest working equally hard, throughout your life, at learning new things on your own, from whatever sources seem most useful to you. I have found that pursuing my own interests in various directions and to various sources of information can take me on fantastic adventures Go to primary sources and go to the great works to learn technique. This was the advice of Matsuo Basho, the 17th-c. Japanese master of the haiku.

16 November 2023

I don’t know who said this but I like it:

“I just don’t have anything to say. As a songwriter, you have to kind of have something to say, something to record, something to ignite a conversation. I don’t have anything right now. I guess I’m uploading information. After that, we’ll see.”

15 November 2023

Main lessons from a series of lectures given by Sir Arthur Quiller-Couch at the University of Cambridge in 1914. 1. Clarity, Precision, and Directness: Emphasize clear, precise, and direct language. Use concrete nouns and active verbs to make writing more vivid and engaging. 2. Avoid Jargon and Euphemism: Steer clear of jargon and euphemisms. Favor straightforward and honest expression to ensure that your writing is accessible and understandable to a broad audience. 3. Effective Communication: Focus on communicating ideas effectively. Avoid overly complex and indirect language that might obscure your message. 4. Balance and Emphasis in Sentences: Pay attention to the balance and emphasis in your sentences. This can significantly impact clarity and the effectiveness of your communication. 5. Importance of Rhythm in Writing: While rhythm is more often associated with poetry, its principles can enhance non-fiction writing by making it more engaging and easier to read. 6. Critique of Overly Complex Language: Criticize and avoid the use of overly complex language. Aim for simplicity to convey complex ideas more effectively. 7. Reflect Personal Thought and Character: Your writing style should be a reflection of your thought and character. Authenticity in your voice can make your writing more relatable and credible. 8. Artistic Approach to Writing: Treat writing as an art form. This means understanding the craft, being mindful of your word choices, and how they come together to convey your message. 9. Practical Understanding Over Theoretical Knowledge: Prioritize practical understanding and application of writing principles over theoretical knowledge. 10. Embrace Innovation and Adaptability: Be open to new forms of expression and styles. Adaptability can make your writing more relevant and engaging in the modern context. 11. Literary Criticism as a Tool for Improvement: Use literary criticism constructively to refine your writing. Critical engagement with your own and others' texts can deepen your understanding and skill. 12. Writing as a Vehicle for Clear Thinking: Recognize that clear writing reflects clear thinking. Improving your writing can also enhance your cognitive processes. 13. Personal Sensibility and Experience: Infuse your writing with personal sensibility and experiences. This adds depth and authenticity to your work. 14. Innovation While Respecting Tradition: Balance innovation with a respect for traditional writing forms. This helps in creating content that is both fresh and grounded.

15 November 2023

Before the first camera was invented, everything ever seen was only ever seen once.

8 November 2023

Notes from Colin and Samir’s interview with Hasan Minhaj: Starting with a confession is incredibly powerful. He started his special with, “You guys want to know a secret. For 4 years, me and my wife couldn’t get pregnant. And it was my fault”. He wanted to directly address the audience, ‘Hey, I’m talking to you.” To get people to tap in for an hour, you need them to know you’re for real. You’re risking something. For Hasan, it’s confession and risk. “History repeats itself, then it deletes itself. It’s just moving to a new location.” “The best art to me, pulls you into the living room.” What’s the idea on paper? How good is the idea on paper? That’s what counts. (”How goods the PDF?”) An artist has something in their heart that they’ve got to say. If you’re making stuff to please some random software engineer in silicon valley more than your audience, you’ve made a terrible mistake. “I think, in a way, we were actually fortunate that money was taken out of the equation because this show (which is now successful) was the lowest common denominator of how we could express ourselves.” Colin Can you do the right thing for the wrong reasons? Is it a signalling tool or is it what you really believe? What do you want to make? That’s how artists think. “The challenge there is the blurred line between artistry and entrepreneurship. You got overhead tied up into your artistry. That’s a really backwards way to be an artist.” Samir “I just don’t want to go down the ‘YouTube med school route’, where 10 years later, I look back and I’m like, why did I just do this? I hope you find the true path of what you really want to do. You use the algorithm, you don’t let it use you.” Advise for any creator, keep your burn low. “Depth is the future. All the creators that are going to last a long time are going to build depth.” Samir. “Success isn’t how many people watched it but the impact you have on the people that did watch.” Samir. If that thing I want to say happens to hit at a moment and it happens to match up with what the audience wants, great. If not, keep your burn low enough so you keep doing it for 4 years.

7 November 2023

Favourite quotes from Tom Scott’s series: How To Be Popular On The Internet Such a great series. Every creator should watch it. “Short answer: well, you make stuff.” “The chances of a project succeeding aren’t really coupled with how much time and money you’ve spent on it.” “If you spend ten dollars and one hour on an idea, it is likely to fail. But if you spend a million dollars, and a year on an idea, it is still likely to fail.” “90% of everything is crap. Most things fail.” “And sure, something that’s spent months being polished might have a slightly better chance of survival, but the odds are still against you. Instead of polishing, you could spend those months shoving out ten or twenty or a hundred ideas, and each one of those projects is a new roll of the dice. And each one of those projects is something you learn from. Something that helps make the next roll of the dice just a little more likely to succeed.” “There are other definitions of success that aren’t just about the numbers.” “Generally, I get those ideas [good ideas] when I’m in the shower, when I’m not really thinking about anything, when my mind’s got time to start putting together everything I’ve been thinking about over the last day. It’s usually a really good plan to act on those ideas if you’re lucky enough to get one of them.” “The secret to success there was connecting with people: provide something they’re interested in and give them a reason to show it to others… that’s what powers sharing online.” “People connect with people” “If all you’re known for is doing one thing, all the world will want to see is that one thing.” “A single popular video does not make you a YouTube star, it makes you the person who stands up and repeats that catchphrase over and over again until everyone’s tired of it.” “If you’re a one-hit wonder, then it’s not you that’s popular; it’s that one hit.” “What you need is a steady build, a back catalogue, enough time to learn the skills that you need to survive under the spotlight, to have long-term, sustainable success.” “The internet works the same way. The new stuff doesn’t necessarily have to be better: it just has to be exciting. People like to have both familiarity and novelty, but there’s got to be both. Too much familiarity is boring. Too much novelty is scary. If you don’t strike a balance, if you can’t change with the times, someone else will be ready and willing to take your audience.” “Your dream job can still be a nightmare if you don’t have a backup plan.” “So these days, I hope that my ideas work, and I try to accept when they don’t. And I try out new things.” “I keep following all those rules I’ve learned: I make as many things as possible, and I try to connect with people.” “If you’re starting out, success might take a week. It might take a month. It might take a century. But every idea you put out there is another roll of the dice, and you can learn from however those dice fall. That’s how you get popular on the internet.”

7 November 2023

Notes from Jack Conte’s (Digital Spaghetti) interview with Van Neistat: Creativity is like being of drugs. You are entirely the thing you’re making. [reworked from original for a tweet] Picasso created over 50,000 pieces of art throughout his life. According to Google, only 51 are deemed ‘notable’. That’s 0.102%. Screw perfectionism. Michel Gondry: “For this DVD I had to decide between going for quality and going for quantity. And I went with quantity because quantity lasts.” Quantity yields better quality (Jack Conte) I will only improve as an artists after making 5,000 version of what I’m making. (Jack Conte) All we’re doing is trying to get them [the viewers] to watch until the end. Grey Gersten: “You need to put breaths in, so that people can digest what you’ve just fed them.” We’re tricking you with the conflict and resolution, to watch the middle. That’s what we want to tell you. How do you get people to care enough to keep watching? You have to ask a question in the beginning. The ending has to be both a surprise and inevitable. Art is the transmission of feeling the artist has experience (Tolstoy) So much artistry happens in the wandering, in the experimentation. (Jack Conte) We got his [Mark Twain] great books because he had debts, because he needed money.

2 November 2023

Notes from Malcolm Gladwell’s Masterclass (Malcolm Gladwell Teaches Writing): Writing is just like a puzzle. You have to find a way to fit all the pieces together. Imperfects are what draw people in. You should mildly irritate the reader. Leave them with a bit of an aftertaste. What is interesting? That’s what drives writing. Be interesting. Give the reader tools. They’ll be inclined to use them (and keep reading). Data is interesting. You just have to find how to connect it with the reader. Make them care about the data. Your writing is the main course. But don’t forget to give the readers some candy. That’s what they’ll talk about. Your job as a writer is to keep the reader going. Invite the reader into the same process you’re going through. Thinking about what you’re going to withhold (what you’re not going to say) is an important part of effective writing. Suspense is when you expect to have been told something by now, but you haven’t been. Surprise is when you’re told something, but you had no idea it was coming. Narrative is just the resolution of problems. Be free to follow your curiosity, even if it doesn’t appear to lead anywhere. Find stories that speak for themselves. All great stories have an ending that transports you somewhere. That takes you somewhere different from when you began. Writing about yourself is hard. The standards are high, and you’re always fighting the assumption of self-absorption. What you find interesting and what your audience finds interesting aren’t perfectly aligned. Part of the challenge with stories about ideas is framing them in a way that makes sense to people. “My goal is to write at an 8th grade level, with ideas that are extremely sophisticated.” Writing should be simple enough to not defeat the reader. Use long sentences sparingly (but your audience will enjoy them if they’ve been setup appropriately). Punctuation is how you establish rhythm. It’s important to read aloud everything you write. You don’t really understand writing until you hear it. Your language is a function of who your audience is, the medium you’re writing in, and the subject. It’s easy to make someone laugh. It’s much harder to make them cry. Being funny is very hard when there’s an expectation you’re going to be funny. Never announce you’re going to be funny. Humour is just a pleasant deviation from expectation. Great titles have a contradiction. They create tension. They create a conflict. The perfect is the enemy of the good. Sometimes, it’s enormously clarifying to figure out how you want to end a story and work backwards. You’ll know what information to withhold, what will maximise the audience's surprise and suspense etc. Your ending should be the moment of maximum emotional response (and your story should end very shortly after that). I never react to being stuck by stopping. Your first draft should be complex and messy. Your second draft should be simple and polished. Edit for clarity. The business of writing, is the business of creative a competitive advantage for yourself. What can I do to be different from everyone else? You don’t necessarily have to be better, you just have to be different. If you write something interesting, the system will find you. People get a lot of pleasure from investigating the contents of other people's mind. All good non-fiction is giving people a window into other people's minds. Often not the writers but someone else.

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